Yeah. I agree " keep it clean" the wording is a lot like Kings. Now is this the first page of the noval? or the first page os a second book? I am still working on my web site but I'll remember the HOLE. Jeannie
Patrick McDonald
· 2 years ago
I love your novel and am a aspiring writer my self . Keep up the good work
Sophie
· 1 year ago
I think this book is going to be a bestseller, it grabs you right from the start, and without action, I think that's pretty good! Sophie, 15
georgedonnelly
· 1 year ago
Your first paragraph grabbed my attention. Well done! I'm going to keep reading.
Aaron Ross Powell
· 1 year ago
Thank you, George. Let me know what you think when you're a little further in to the story.
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Yeah. I agree " keep it clean" the wording is a lot like Kings. Now is this the first page of the noval? or the first page os a second book?
I am still working on my web site but I'll remember the HOLE.
Jeannie
I love your novel and am a aspiring writer my self . Keep up the good work
I think this book is going to be a bestseller, it grabs you right from the start, and without action, I think that's pretty good!
Sophie, 15
Your first paragraph grabbed my attention. Well done! I'm going to keep reading.
Thank you, George. Let me know what you think when you're a little further in to the story.